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Henchmen. A 3 Act Summary

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While my story didn't feel like it flowed with the prompts, once upon a time, because of that, etc. I did manage to get 3 acts out of this and find reasons for why things were happening. Let me just add that I've written this story at least 5 times and I'm trying to center it on the process my main character, K, goes through.
So as the video will describe, this is the story of K and how he became who we know him to be. Along the way he wants for something different because his goal was always to reunite with his family.

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