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Once upon a time, there was a lonely old man who lived in a retirement village called Shady Oaks.
Every day, he would sit in his armchair, watching everyone having fun, but not him. He didn't play, he didn't watch. He didn't even play with the cat.
Until one day, he receives an unexpected visit from his daughter and his mischievous grandson, named Leandro.
Because of that, the boy starts messing up in the retirement village. Changing the TV channel. Cheating at chess. And even breaking things.
Because of that, the old man, wanting to correct the boy's behavior, calls him and says he's going to tell a story.
Because of that, he tells the story about a boy who messed up almost as much as Leandro, and was punished severely. This scares Leandro.
Until finally, the grandfather reveals that the whole story was true. With that the boy learns the lesson.
And every day since, after teaching his grandson the old man feels that his duty is done, and that a weight has been lifted from his shoulders.

The moral of the story will be Balance. The boy can play and even get up to something, but he needs to moderate it.

Once upon a time, there was a lonely old man who lived in a retirement village called Shady Oaks.
  Every day, he would sit in his armchair, watching everyone having fun, but not him. He didn't play, he didn't watch. He didn't even play with the cat.
 Until one day, he receives an unexpected visit from his daughter and his mischievous grandson, named Leandro.
 Because of that, the boy starts messing up in the retirement village. Changing the TV channel. Cheating at chess. And even breaking things.
 Because of that, the old man, wanting to correct the boy's behavior, calls him and says he's going to tell a story.
  Because of that, he tells the story about a boy who messed up almost as much as Leandro, and was punished severely. This scares Leandro.
  Until finally, the grandfather reveals that the whole story was true. With that the boy learns the lesson.
  And every day since, after teaching his grandson the old man feels that his duty is done, and that a weight has been lifted from his shoulders.

The moral of the story will be Balance. The boy can play and even get up to something, but he needs to moderate it.

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