I like the idea of being one of the last people on earth and having to break out of your shell to escape! However, I am confused about how/why everyone suddenly vanished over night, how Gina found the last 2 people alive on earth, and where this group found the really old map? Maybe you can come up with some ideas for these other two characters backstories and how they got let behind, and maybe one of them had the map with them? Like a family heirloom?

I didn’t her the moral but good story. Some details need to be filled in for a more smoother and digestible intake.

I love the concept and how surreal and funny the ending seems. I am interested to how they get to Paris and also the line to what the moral of the story was cut off, but this sounds like a fun adventure!