Hi there, apologies for baiting a click from most of you who want a cleaned up art and an easy watch, but sorry to dissapoint, I just want to help get my story across.

As i said in the beginning here are the major beats of the story incase you need more context, please refrain from seeing this at first as i want to know what reads clearly and what doesnt.

Its about a deer named nick whos going to a new fancy school to follow in his rich families footsteps and continue their legacy, but he doesnt want to. He then gets bullied by his classmates, and one day when they throw his backpack in the trash Nick meets a fox named clyde who is an a street artist.

Clyde then shows Nick to his home which is an abandoned train depot with boxcars and they start doing graffiti together and they have sort of a moment and Nick has a whole awakening in himself and street art.

Nick and Clyde spend the rest of the day together, and has so much fun that he messed up his hair on accident. Clyde then hands Nick a spare hat (a beanie) Nick doesnt realize how much time has actually past and rushes home it already being sunset.

When nick returns home his dad is there waiting inside near the front door very stern looking. The dad questions his whereabouts and Nick tries to explain the awesome time he had, but the dad (being uptight rich, and overall not a good guy) tells Nick he is sending student campus police (which happen to be the bullies from earlier) to find Clyde and turn him into the police.

the dad shuns and sends nick back to his room for hanging out with Clyde as he is the exact opposite of what the father wants Nick to associate with.

At this point nick is at his lowest and laying in bed feeling miserable physically and emotionally for letting this happen to clyde. therefore nick realizes he cant give up and has to fight for what he knows is best for him and his new friend.

Nick makes a lot of noise bruising his elbows charging with all his might to budge the window. Which draw the attention of his dad to come in and orders Nick to stop, Nick charges one last time and manages to smash the window and he bails out.

Nick then falls 2 stories into a dumpster and lands safely and he sprints towards the old train depot.

Once clyde arrives he’s witnessing Clyde being basically kidnapped by the bullies from earlier and being loaded into the back of an van to be turned into the police never to be seen again. Until Nick intervened, he then finally stops becoming the passive person he once was and manages to save Clyde by using the power of art (weaponized) lol

Nick checks up on clyde and clyde thanks him for saving him. They then sit ontop of a box car and watch the sun rise on a new life theyre going to spend together( as nick has left his old life behind and is much happier this way)

Once this is how i want it, then i will make a stylized 3d version for you guys which will be avaliable as an actual film in the spring of 2023. For now im just working on the story.

If you are seeing this i want to personally thank you for your time. I happily await critique and don't at all mind discussing the reel in the comments.

THANK YOU :)