Week5-Lucky's Abracapothecary
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Submission for Week
5
Team:
Mejanzen
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Here is my rough storyboards of Act 1 of my story:
ACT1
Ollie: I bet you’re all wondering how we got from this
Shows hypnotized people…
(to her working at his store)
Ollie: to this…(ssays on the intercom,)Thankyou for shoopping at Lucky’s Abracapothecary,
(Shows ollie narrating the slide)
Let me just begin our story here…(showing rewinding tape…)
Once upon a time…There was a Giant Cat.
Lucky: hey that’s me.
(Shows him preparing for his store opening…)
Ollie: he’s Not just any cat…he’s a cat that owns a family store.
Lucky: I want to make my family proud! (He pops up on the screen as it shows them in the backround)
Ollie: And its his first Time opening on Earth. …
Lucky: Wahhh I dont know what im doing!
Goes back to white board scene…
Ollie: It wasn’t just any store, it was a Abracapotehcary store. He sells magical and non magic items.
(Shows lucky int he backround sweeping up his store and looking at it….
Lucky: Beautiful! Ahh, opened for business!
Ollie: Then there is me, Ollie. I moved to a different neighborhood and my parents wanted me to go to
A different junior high than my friends. So I’m struggling trying too find new friends instead being the odd one
Out. Eating lunches alone. (Show a person playing sad violin sound near her and she is all confused)
Ollie: I had this brilliant idea to try to make new Friends at the halloween dance.
Ollie: Every day…I’m struggling to find a way to make friends and everyday,
Lucky: Everyday I was was trying to prepare For my store opening on Halloween.
Both: Until one day…
Ollie: I meet him on the way to my halloween dance ….
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