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Hey guys, its been a hot minute, trying to balance two projects at once. I've been stuck on conflict and just decided to keep it simple. Formulating a good story is sure a process and it keeps evolving everytime i do it. I made a decent looking storyboard and i was halfway through it and I thought "am i happy how this story is going end?" I instantly said to myself "no" because I didnt even know where i was going and just felt lost for the past week in a cycle of plot torment lol. It wasn't until I chatted for half an hour with my teacher and he said to take reference from movies I like. He pulled out a random show penguins of madagasgar it was, and instantly I saw the correlation between my story and the first scene of that movie and I was like "Maybe i CAN make this work, just needs some work" and I ended up making my weeks worth of work in just an hour because i knew where i was now heading instead of spending 6+ hours going in circles with *fancy* storyboards that just suck (not to say this one doesnt suck equally as much lmao). Anywho that's just been my sort of journey this week.

And for the characters let me explain if it wasn't clear in the quick board. A wolf named Clyde and a deer named Nick do graffiti art everyday at an abandoned train depot and avoid the local bully from beating them by staying silent and out of the way. Until one day a new guy named Fen comes along into the depot but is picked on by the bully. Because of that the bully decides to pick on him because he is new, because of that Clyde and Nick notice and idly watch and see how they never speak up for themselves and how they need to stop the cycle of harassment. Until Finally Clyde and Nick decide they will no longer be afraid of the bully and save the new guy Fen from the bully. And after that they became friends and can now live in peace.

Obviously not the quick version, but its the smallest i can get without leaving any important information. The quickest version I can offer is 2 Friends who are bullied save another person and stop the bully once and for all.

Also sorry for baiting yall with last weeks art on the cover, I just need your guys feedback so i can continue to get better and better and better and better so i can make a story everyone of you can enjoy. (I will be making this short film in VR for my week 9 final)

Anywho if you managed to read all of that I give you my personal thanks and a 24hr good luck card :)

Thanks!!

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