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END OF SANTA: ACT 1

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Aloha!

sorry for the late submission, hopefully it's not to late to get feedback, you guys have been awesome, and i've used your feedback every week to make this story better.

Overall I really struggled with everything on this weeks assignment.

Artwork is far from perfect, I have easily over 100 frames T.T so after a while I was unable to craft each frame. Hopefully the idea still comes across. How do these guys at Pixar do this in such little time.

Story wise:
My act 1 acts to set up the premise of my story.
"In a world where people don't believe in Christmas or Santa no more,
Santa is now stalked by a dark entity, as he tries to make people believe in XMAS one last time."

My act 1 can be broken into two parts.
part 1:
establishes the story, what it was like before, and now. I have attempted to visualise Santa having flash backs though the zoom into the eye, and see what he's thinking mechanic. Not sure if this comes across properly T.T, then when he cuts back to present day, it match cuts and fades back to the present. Let me know if this is clear, and if not, suggestions, as the establishing of how Santa got here is important for my story. Thank you :)

Part 2:
Back to present day, Dark entity is stalking Santa as he travels. (At the end, Santa will have to face this entity, that represents Santa not being needed no more, and Santa without a purpose and so the entity is death, ready to take Santa, as he did his loved ones).

Okay my brain is fried, i've done 3 all day and all nighters, and i don't know what i'm typing no more, and i think my submission might be total crap, so yay.

Have a good week pixar class! sorry if this is confusing. And, my brain hurts.
MUCH LOVE T.T

Aloha!

sorry for the late submission, hopefully it's not to late to get feedback, you guys have been awesome, and i've used your feedback every week to make this story better.

Overall I really struggled with everything on this weeks assignment.

Artwork is far from perfect, I have easily over 100 frames T.T so after a while I was unable to craft each frame. Hopefully the idea still comes across. How do these guys at Pixar do this in such little time.

Story wise:
My act 1 acts to set up the premise of my story.
"In a world where people don't believe in Christmas or Santa no more, 
Santa is now stalked by a dark entity, as he tries to make people believe in XMAS one last time."

My act 1 can be broken into two parts.
part 1: 
establishes the story, what it was like before, and now. I have attempted to visualise Santa having flash backs though the zoom into the eye, and see what he's thinking mechanic. Not sure if this comes across properly T.T, then when he cuts back to present day, it match cuts and fades back to the present. Let me know if this is clear, and if not, suggestions, as the establishing of how Santa got here is important for my story. Thank you :)

Part 2: 
Back to present day, Dark entity is stalking Santa as he travels. (At the end, Santa will have to face this entity, that represents Santa not being needed no more, and Santa without a purpose and so the entity is death, ready to take Santa, as he did his loved ones).

Okay my brain is fried, i've done 3 all day and all nighters, and i don't know what i'm typing no more, and i think my submission might be total crap, so yay.

Have a good week pixar class! sorry if this is confusing. And, my brain hurts.
MUCH LOVE T.T

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