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I don't believe in Santa ACT 1+2 (W.I.P.)

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K.I.S.S. (Keep it simple Stupid)
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Aloha Everyone,

firstly, thank you all for your feedback last week, it was really constructive and helpful. I didn't have time to revise my act 1 this week, as ACT 2 was also a struggle to complete. Your feedback for act 2, and act 1, will be addressed in due time :)

For my Pixar classmate regulars, you're the best, and you can skip to 02:58 to jump into act 2 :) My act 2 is shorter then act 1 (once I address your feedback in act 1, it should hopefully be shorter).

For this weeks submission:

- I'm not completely happy with illustrations as always. It's hard trying to be a storyboard artist, when illustration is not your background T.T But hopefully the story comes across.

- I think the pacing might be a little too fast for act 2, please let me know what you think, unfortunately i've not been able to craft the edit, and find the right music yet, but let me know if you think it's fast and if you don't have time to see the images.

- Please let me know if anything is making sense, or if you're confused, what's confusing you. I think i've gotten to the point where, I've spent so much time on this, my judgement and brain is numb to this project. Like I'm rewatching things, reviewing things, and my brains doesn't register anything or any information.

- Also, I haven't coloured the floor in white but I will do eventually (the snowball isn't random haha).

Much love Everyone, hope you guys are good, and this project isn't driving you nuts, like it's driving me haha

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