JARBIS
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I'm going to tell ... the story of a boy named Jarbis.
Jarbis was a bratty boy, confident... almost arrogant.. Anyone who saw him from afar would see a wide smile and him up to something.
And Jarbis was ALWAYS up to something. He broke things, spoiled others, as if the consequences were not feared. But he feared.
He was afraid .. of being grounded.
What people didn't know was why they made such a mess. .. He just wanted attention.
As an older brother, he didn't get as much attention as the others, and he messed around to get it. .. But he would find out,.. it was the wrong way.
One night, his mother, already tired and impatient with her son's latest mess, on an impulse, prayed for an entity to punish her son.
And her prayer.. was answered!
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