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Heya! It's been a blast to participate in this session, and I'm happy to finally deliver my final submission of my story reel, despite being busy. Here is my story reel for this session, Hope you enjoy it and be moved by it!

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A young boy, named Danny Antei, practiced a sci-fi video game so he could perfect his 'battle against his father, while her mother was preparing dinner. Suddenly, a bell rang. His mother thought it was his father, however, it was his father's work partner, who delivered hard-hitting news. Young Danny, who heard a broken bowl and his mom's somber, rushed his way to the front door, as he would be received reality-changing news.

A portal to Mars, developed by his father and co. exploded. His partners were fine, however, his father's existence wasn't even found around the lab after the accident. He was gone.

As expected, Young Danny was devastated hearing the news and soon he rushed to his bedroom, crying his heart out. As he held a photo frame containing him and his father celebrating Danny's victory in the science fair, he developed a belief that his father might have been alive and safe somewhere.

His belief turned into years of research, to figure out what happened with the accident. he also began to develop his skill in engineering, becoming a prodigy. As soon as he collect his puzzle pieces, he began to round in the second phase, to fix the portal and find his father.

17 years old Danny is passing by his mother's bedroom. Before he goes, he sees his mother and contemplates whether it's a good idea to leave his mother behind, as she never even knows his mission. but his determination is bigger, as he leaves his house.

He soon arrives at an abandoned sports goods store, which was a cover for a secret lab below. After finding the door to the location, he soon begins to fix the portal. after hours, he turns on the portal, but the portal shows a strange planet instead of Mars. Sharing his father's curiosity, he goes to the other side of the portal inside and explores the planet. As soon as he explores it, the portal becomes unstable and significantly shows a sign to explode. Danny rushes to exit the planet, but it was too late. He knees in frustration, as he now is trapped on an unknown planet.

He wanders in despair as he tries to figure out how to get out. The planet seems so dry and empty, and there seems no way out. Fortunately, a plane heads to his location. He instantly gives the signal but soon realizes the plane is about to crash. He avoids the crash but goes to the damaged plane. suddenly, an alien shows up amid the crumbs, startling Danny. The alien tells him to follow him quickly, which confuses Danny. It turns out they aren't alone, as the bike members appear far aside ragingly. Danny has no choice but to follow him to his scooter, which the bikers follow. The chase is on.

Danny frantically asks the alien what's going on, and the alien finally explains. Amos - the alien introduces him, tried to test-drive his brother's prototype plane quietly, but the plane went unstable and hit the biker's motorbikes. To make it worse, he then ran away from the situation and then blasted one of the biker's motorbikes in panic during the chase. Danny is outraged by the explanation and demands him to stop and apologize, but Amos says it is too late, as the bikers start blazing a ray at them. Danny begrudgingly agrees.

During the chase, Danny asks Amos why he stole the plane, and he explains that he just wanted to help his brother's project. He always want to be a hero like his father, who was a General. unfortunately, Amos' father was caught by the conqueror, during a war, and it was happened before Amos was even born.father's4 years, he never sees his father face directly.

Danny begins to sympathize with him, and they begin to develop a bond. He then asks Amos what his father did before he got caught. Amos shares the story her mother told him, that his father sacrificed himself so his soldiers were safe and finalized the mission to win the war. His mother also told Amos that his father was a very responsible person, even when the situation didn't do him favor. Amos then realizes to do the right thing.

Amos seeks an empty spot on a cliff so he can park his scooter. The bikers soon follow. Danny, Amos, and the bikers finally meet each other at the cliff. The bikers outrageously ask questions, for which Amos apologizes and explains what happened. He almost slips at the fact that he indeed rayed them, so Danny steps in and informs that the plane was uncontrollable, hence the blast. The bikers believe them, and soon leave the location with a warning to them. Amos and Danny are relieved.

As gratitude for helping him solving the issue, Amos asks Danny to stay in his house until they can figure out how to get Danny back home. Danny accepts the offer. Amos and Danny travel across a dry, rocky area to a metropolitan city of Nemudo, where Amos and his family live. They arrive at Amos's house. His family enthusiastically greets him, while his brother scolds him for his clumsiness.

At night, Amos struggles to sleep despite having experience so much things prior. He opens his father's journal to contemplate what's next for him. He also wonders what his father is doing right now, somewhere there.

The shot goes into a palace, where His Majesty, the king of the planet lives. He turns out has observed Danny in his huge smart screen. He soon goes to the a photo frame of.... Him and his son celebrating his son's victory at science fair. The camera soon focus on His Majesty's face, a Human, and also, Danny's father.

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Rafael Ferdi

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