Angel

This story has a lot of potential! Not too mention it would be incredible for a Pixar or Disney short! It's a really fun idea to think that Disneyland and only Disneyland isn't run by a mouse but a duck! I suppose the duck won a court case for the park huh? Anyway, this short film is really fun and I can see this being really great one day! Keep fleshing out your ideas, keep writing and keep being you!

Haroon

I really like the drawings which are quite minimalistic and still get the ideas across. Great work!

TT

The story and drawings are great, and looking forward to seeing it animated one day.

Lupo

The drawings and narration are endearing and the story is simple. I feel as if Walt Duck's journey through the story would have benefited some development as is hinted he strives for perfection before Bun Dog shows up. Otherwise, the visual storytelling is effective, and the story structure is solid. This is a very lovely story, though there is room for improvement when it comes to character motivations and arcs. Great job!!

Gowri

Nice story! The drawings are super cute, and the diologue is very interesting and unique to the story. Maybe take pictures instead of a video next time as it is a little blurry and messy.

Caleb

I like the story and the fact it takes place in 2045.

Andrey

1) What did you like or love about this submission? I loved the art.

2) What did you find confusing or unclear?​ I couldn't here you.

3) What suggestions do you have to make it stronger? speak up more.

Cameron

1) What did you like or love about this submission?
I loved the duck.

2) What did you find confusing or unclear?​
The pictures.

3) What suggestions do you have to make it stronger?
To color it and be more detailed verbally.