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Hello!
I made small big changes!!!
I lost count how many times I changed the story, but now I feel that it is better formed and I managed to link several things.
I really appreciate all your comments, I hope you enjoy it!
ACT I
Once upon a time there was a co-pilot dog who wanted to be Captain, but don't fill out his admission form.
- Max puts on his uniform.
- The alarm sounds.
- Max keeps the captain's admission form without filling it out.
- He goes out and closes the door.
Every day he gets distracted and makes a mistake in his work, but his captain solves it.
- Max starts to run around the track before taking flight, but ends up going after a cat.
- The captain takes off the plane before finishing the runway.
- Max smiles at his captain with ears down and shoulders up, embarrassed.
Until one day, the constant turbulence of a future storm makes the captain dizzy and he leaves his seat.
-The captain with his hand in his mouth and green, runs out of the cabin.
ACT II
Because of that Max takes the position of Captain, but verything distracts him.
- Max sitting in the captain's seat, drives the plane.
- Lots of lights flickering on the controls and Max sees the lights one by one and the plane becomes unbalanced.
- The passengers scream and Max resumes the flight.
- A bunch of birds flies by the window, Max chases them with the plane.
- The captain enters the cabin of the plane scared.
Because of that when lightning strikes the plane, the captain is knocked out, the emergency lights come on and the screams of the passengers resound.
- Max sitting in the captain's seat sees the Captain passed out on the floor.
- Max follows the red interspersed lights with his eyes, while an alarm sounds.
- Max pricks up his ears and shakes his head when he hears screams.
Because of that Max is overwhelming with the amount of stimuli around him.
- Strong winds whip the plane.
- Max holds the plane's steering wheel tight and the plane flies unbalanced.
- Max closes his eyes and rests his head on the steering wheel.
- Lightning crosses the sky very close to the plane.
- Max opens his eyes scared and sees a bird resting on the windshield, takes flight and leaves.
ACT III
Until he finally remembers how he flew the plane chasing birds and now he flies the plane dodging the lightning bolts of the storm.
- Max chases them with the plane
- The plane lands at the destination airport and Max uses the microphone to report it.
- The captain wakes up and sees Max serious and with a small smile.
Since that day, he is confident in his abilities and knows that he is as good as any Captain.
- Max fills out his captain's admission form.
- Max delivers his admission form to the captain.
Moral: Face your fears and trust yourself to achieve your goals, so you will stop postponing them.
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